An easily hyped up girl who goes crazy over Tokio Hotel and is a diehard fan of Bill Kaulitz. She dreams of being thin one day, or perhaps having her own dance concert, which both are very impossible.
Just got a poem from jiaqi. I'm lazy to tell you face-to-face, anyway i don't think i'll have the time. So i'll just tell you here.
I guess she wrote it for someone. And SHE wrote something for her too. Both touching, both with raw feelings, both are poems(LOL), both in chinese, both with the similar style, both with the similar story, both with the same sad ending...
OMG COOOL I JUST RANDOMLY WROTE IT!!!! SOUDNS SOOOO COOL RIGHT??? Both with the same sad ending....... AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!! Kay nvm.
Jiaqi i think you should replace 规律 with something else cos ru ci gui lv is not acceptable leh. Gui lv is noun, then after ru ci should be adjactive leh! And you can make some changes to the 7th stanza because it feels a bit, brief and rush as if you're wanting to skip to the next one. The 你会消失 part is a bit, too, i don't know how to say but it just doesn't feel as right there as the other parts.
Oh and one good sign, i didn't understand it. So it means that it's a good poem XDDD hahahahaha jkjk lah! I undetstood!!! Yours was clearer.
